Question

Difficulty: EasySentence Fragments

Read the passage below and select the best revision for the underlined portion.

New Caledonian crows are famous for their ability to manufacture tools. Because they bend twigs into hooks to extract insects from tree bark.

Which of the following is the most grammatically correct revision of the underlined portion?

  1. A
    NO CHANGE
  2. They bend twigs into hooks to extract insects from tree bark.Answer
  3. C
    They bend twigs into hooks; to extract insects from tree bark.
  4. D
    They bend twigs into hooks, they extract insects from tree bark.

Answer

The option that removes the subordinating conjunction to form a complete independent sentence.
The correct option removes the subordinating conjunction to turn the dependent clause into a complete, independent sentence with its own subject and verb. This resolves the sentence fragment error while maintaining the intended meaning.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Identify the grammatical error in the underlined portion.
The clause starting with the subordinating conjunction is treated as a standalone sentence, making it a dependent clause fragment.
A dependent clause cannot stand alone as a grammatically complete sentence.
2
Evaluate the choices to find one that resolves the fragment without introducing new punctuation errors.
The revision that removes the subordinating conjunction creates a complete, independent sentence.
An independent sentence must express a complete thought and contain both a subject and a verb.

Key Concept

Identifying and correcting sentence fragments caused by dependent clauses.
Estimated Time:45s
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