Question

Difficulty: Very hardEstablishing Introductions and Thesis Statements

The writer is considering adding a sentence at the beginning of the passage (before sentence 1):

[1] For centuries, the Julian calendar, introduced by Julius Caesar in 4646 BCE, served as the primary method of tracking time in the Western world. However, the Julian system calculated the solar year as exactly 365.25365.25 days, which was approximately 1111 minutes and 1414 seconds longer than the actual astronomical year. While this discrepancy seemed negligible in the short term, it accumulated over centuries, drifting by one full day every 128128 years. By the sixteenth century, this error had shifted the calendar by ten days, disrupting the scheduling of Easter and other seasonal festivals.

[2] To address this compounding error, Pope Gregory XIII assembled a team of astronomers and mathematicians led by Aloysius Lilius. In 15821582, the Gregorian calendar was introduced, implementing a refined system for leap years: centurial years would only be leap years if they were divisible by 400400. To correct the accumulated drift, ten days were eliminated from October 15821582, meaning that the day following October 44 was designated as October 1515. Although met with initial resistance, this system gradually achieved global adoption, aligning human timekeepers with the rhythm of the stars.

Which of the following choices for the proposed sentence most effectively introduces the main topic of the passage?

  1. The transition from the Julian calendar to the Gregorian calendar resolved a subtle astronomical error that had slowly misaligned the tracking of time with the seasons.Answer
  2. B
    Although the Julian calendar served Europe well for centuries; a minor miscalculation in the length of a solar year eventually necessitated a major reform.
  3. C
    When Pope Gregory XIII introduced the Gregorian calendar in 15821582, he was attempting to fix a ten-day discrepancy that disrupted religious holidays.
  4. D
    The Julian calendar was based on a year of 365.25365.25 days, which is longer than the actual astronomical year, this error caused the calendar to drift over time.

Answer

The transition from the Julian calendar to the Gregorian calendar resolved a subtle astronomical error that had slowly misaligned the tracking of time with the seasons.
The correct option is the only choice that is both grammatically correct and rhetorically complete. It establishes the main topic of the passage by referencing both the Julian calendar and the Gregorian calendar, and summarizes the core conflict: resolving a subtle astronomical error that misaligned timekeeping with the seasons.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Analyze the main focus of the entire passage.
Paragraph 1 describes how the Julian calendar's small astronomical error drifted over centuries. Paragraph 2 explains how the Gregorian calendar corrected this drift in 1582.
An effective introduction to the passage must encompass the themes of both paragraphs, linking the Julian system's error to the Gregorian correction.
2
Evaluate the rhetorical focus of each option.
The correct option addresses both the Julian and Gregorian systems, establishing the transition as a correction for time misalignment. The option focusing solely on Pope Gregory's action is too narrow because it omits the Julian calendar context.
Eliminating options that are too narrow ensures the selected thesis statement represents the whole passage.
3
Check the remaining options for grammatical correctness.
The option containing 'Although' is ungrammatical because a semicolon separates its dependent clause from the main clause. The option ending with 'drift over time' contains a comma splice.
Standardized tests require the introductory sentence to be free of grammatical errors, such as fragments and comma splices.

Key Concept

Establishing Introductions and Thesis Statements
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