Question

Difficulty: MediumParallel Structure

The following segments are part of a sentence that requires parallel structure. Arrange the segments in the correct order to form a logically coherent and grammatically correct sentence.

  1. 1The regional director proposed a strategy focused
  2. 2first on streamlining internal communication,
  3. 3next on reducing operational expenses,
  4. 4and finally on expanding the customer service team.

Answer

The regional director proposed a strategy focused first on streamlining internal communication, next on reducing operational expenses, and finally on expanding the customer service team.
The correct ordering places the independent clause first to establish the subject and main verb. The following list maintains parallel structure by using the same grammatical pattern—the preposition 'on' followed by a gerund ('streamlining', 'reducing', 'expanding')—for all three list items. Additionally, the transition words 'first', 'next', and 'and finally' dictate a clear, logical sequence that cannot be rearranged without creating a logical contradiction.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Identify the main clause of the sentence.
The main clause is 'The regional director proposed a strategy focused'.
Every complete sentence requires a subject and a verb to establish the main thought before listing supporting details.
2
Identify the parallel elements and their logical sequence markers.
The parallel elements are prepositional phrases: 'on streamlining...', 'on reducing...', and 'on expanding...'. The markers are 'first', 'next', and 'and finally'.
To maintain parallel structure, each item in the list must use the same grammatical form (preposition 'on' followed by a gerund). The transition words indicate a chronological sequence.
3
Arrange the segments using the logical markers and grammatical structures.
The sequence must start with the main clause, followed by 'first', then 'next', and end with the conjunction 'and finally'.
This sequence satisfies both the logical order of transitions and the grammatical requirements of parallel structure.

Key Concept

Parallel structure requires that items in a series or list follow the same grammatical pattern. In this sentence, each item in the list must be formatted as a prepositional phrase starting with the preposition 'on' followed by a gerund (verb ending in -ing).
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