Question

Difficulty: MediumMeeting Specific Rhetorical Goals

Passage Excerpt:

For years, scientists believed the ocean floor was a flat, featureless plain. In the 1950s, geologist Marie Tharp began analyzing echo-sounder profiles of the Atlantic Ocean, meticulously plotting depth measurements by hand. Her work revealed a massive, continuous underwater mountain range, now known as the Mid-Atlantic Ridge, which provided crucial evidence for the theory of continental drift. Although her male colleagues initially dismissed her findings as 'girl talk,' Tharp persisted in her research, [underlined portion].

The writer wants to add a phrase in the underlined portion that emphasizes the painstaking and time-consuming nature of Tharp's mapping process. Which choice best accomplishes this goal?

  1. spending years hand-drawing thousands of individual depth soundings onto large paper sheets.Answer
  2. B
    which eventually convinced the scientific community that tectonic plates were indeed moving.
  3. C
    an achievement that brought her significant recognition and awards later in her career.
  4. D
    she worked late into the night, the project took several years to complete.

Answer

The correct choice is the option that describes spending years hand-drawing thousands of individual depth soundings onto large paper sheets, as it directly emphasizes the time-consuming and painstaking nature of the mapping process.
The phrase describing the hand-drawing of thousands of soundings over several years directly addresses the rhetorical goal by illustrating both the painstaking and time-consuming nature of the mapping process. The action of drawing by hand shows the meticulousness, and the mention of years highlights the duration of the effort.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Analyze the prompt to identify the specific rhetorical goal.
The goal is to find a phrase that emphasizes both the painstaking (meticulous, detailed, difficult) and time-consuming (taking a long duration) nature of Marie Tharp's mapping process.
Understanding the exact rhetorical constraint is crucial for evaluating the options.
2
Evaluate the options for grammatical correctness and alignment with the rhetorical goal.
The option describing hand-drawing thousands of soundings over years is grammatically correct and directly shows the painstaking work and time spent. The options mentioning tectonic plates and awards are grammatically correct but focus on the wrong topic (impact and recognition). The option beginning with 'she worked late' contains a comma splice.
This narrows down the choices to the one that satisfies both grammar and the prompt's specific requirement.

Key Concept

Meeting Specific Rhetorical Goals
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