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Question 321Question

The following passage is an excerpt from an essay about the invention of the automatic dishwasher.

Although Josephine Cochrane had no formal training in engineering, she resolved to design a machine that could wash dishes faster and safer than human hands. Working in a backyard shed with a local mechanic, she constructed a copper boiler with a wooden wheel that turned as hot water sprayed onto wire racks. She was motivated by the desire to solve a practical problem, and this motivation drove her to persist through multiple design failures until she completed it. Her invention was patented in 1886 and later won top honors at the 1893 World's Columbian Exposition.

Which choice most effectively eliminates the wordiness and redundancy of the underlined portion while maintaining grammatical correctness?

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Answer: Driven by a desire to solve a practical problem, she persisted through multiple design failures.

Answer

Driven by a desire to solve a practical problem, she persisted through multiple design failures.
The correct option most effectively eliminates wordiness and redundancy by using a concise introductory participial phrase ('Driven by a desire to solve a practical problem') to modify the subject, which is active, clear, and grammatically correct.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Identify wordiness and redundancy in the underlined portion.
The original sentence contains passive voice ('She was motivated by') and redundant phrasing that repeats the idea of motivation ('desire to solve... and this motivation drove her...').
ACT English prioritizes conciseness and clarity; expressing the same idea multiple times is incorrect.
2
Evaluate the grammar of the concise alternatives.
The option beginning with 'She was motivated' is a comma splice. The option containing 'that she faced' incorrectly sets off a restrictive clause with commas. The option beginning with 'Driven by a desire' is both grammatically correct and concise.
An option must be grammatically correct to be the right answer, even if it is concise.

Key Concept

Eliminating Wordiness
Question 322Question

The following passage contains an underlined portion.

Mary Anning, a nineteenth-century British paleontologist, combed the cliffs of Lyme Regis to find fossils of prehistoric marine reptiles. Owing to the fact of her possessing a keen eye that was observant of small details, Anning discovered the first correctly identified ichthyosaur skeleton. Her findings challenged established scientific beliefs about the history of the Earth.

Which choice most effectively and concisely expresses the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Answer: With her keen eye, Anning discovered

Answer

With her keen eye, Anning discovered
The correct choice is the most concise and direct phrasing that maintains grammatical correctness and preserves the meaning of the sentence. The phrase 'With her keen eye, Anning discovered' conveys the idea clearly without unnecessary words.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Analyze the underlined portion for wordiness, redundancy, and grammatical errors.
Identify that the phrase 'Owing to the fact of her possessing a keen eye that was observant of small details' contains unnecessary words like 'Owing to the fact of' and redundant expressions.
To determine if the original phrasing needs revision for conciseness.
2
Evaluate the alternative choices for clarity, conciseness, and grammatical correctness.
Eliminate wordy, run-on, or fragment options: the option with a comma splice ('Anning possessed a keen eye, she discovered') and the option creating a fragment ('Because Anning possessed a keen eye...').
To ensure the selected option is both concise and grammatically correct.
3
Confirm that the chosen concise option preserves the original meaning and fits the context.
The option 'With her keen eye, Anning discovered' is clear, grammatically sound, and significantly more concise than the original.
To finalize the best choice that meets the ACT standard for eliminating wordiness.

Key Concept

Eliminating Wordiness
Estimated Time:1m 0s
Question 323Question

The following passage is an excerpt from an essay about the invention of Morse code.

In the 1830s, Samuel Morse and Alfred Vail developed the electric telegraph, a device that revolutionized long-distance communication. To represent letters, Vail assigned the shortest codes to the most frequently occurring letters, [a decision that was made to increase] transmission speed. By analyzing quantities of metal type in a local print shop, he determined that the letter 'E' was used most often, so he gave it the simplest code: a single dot.

Which of the following choices for the underlined portion most effectively eliminates wordiness and maintains grammatical correctness?

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Answer: increasing

Answer

The correct choice is 'increasing', which provides the most concise, active, and grammatically correct phrasing.
The phrasing 'increasing' is correct because it is the most concise and direct way to express the action. It forms a grammatically sound participial phrase that avoids the wordiness and passive voice of the original text.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Analyze the underlined portion within the context of the sentence to identify wordiness and structural redundancy.
The original phrasing 'a decision that was made to increase' is excessively wordy and passive.
Identifying stylistic inefficiencies helps determine the need for a more concise revision.
2
Evaluate the options for conciseness while ensuring grammatical rules are not violated.
The phrasing 'increasing' is highly concise and grammatically correct as a participial phrase. The phrasing 'this choice increased' creates a comma splice, and 'which was a choice that increased,' introduces a punctuation error by placing a comma before the direct object.
Selecting the option that balances brevity with proper grammar is required to solve the question.

Key Concept

Eliminating wordiness and passive constructions to improve sentence flow and conciseness.
Question 324Question

Read the passage below. Identify the single word that most precisely and clearly completes the sentence to maintain the formal, academic tone of the passage. Write the correct word in the blank.

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Although many nineteenth-century botanists believed that carnivorous plants were a bizarre anomaly of nature, Charles Darwin argued that their specialized leaves were highly evolved adaptations for nutrient-poor soils. In his 1875 book *Insectivorous Plants*, Darwin detailed how these species capture prey to their meager intake of nitrogen from the soil, rather than relying solely on root absorption.
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Answer

The correct answer is 'supplement' (or 'augment'). These words precisely describe adding to a meager supply of nitrogen rather than replacing root absorption, which matches the academic tone of the passage.
The correct answer 'supplement' (or 'augment') precisely conveys that prey capture is used to add to the meager nitrogen absorbed through the roots, rather than replacing root absorption entirely. This choice matches the passage's formal, scientific register.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Analyze the context of the sentence containing the blank.
The text states that the plants do not rely 'solely' on root absorption, indicating that prey digestion is an addition to, rather than a replacement for, soil-based nutrients.
Understanding whether the action is addition or replacement is necessary to select the correct vocabulary word.
2
Evaluate the register and tone of the passage.
The passage discusses historical scientific theories in botany, requiring a formal, academic tone.
This rules out informal words like 'help' or 'boost' which are stylistically inappropriate.
3
Identify the precise term that means to add to a deficient supply.
The word 'supplement' (or 'augment') fits both the grammatical context and the required meaning of adding to the nitrogen intake.
Choosing 'supplement' achieves both precision and stylistic consistency.

Key Concept

Selecting the most precise word that matches the tone, context, and exact meaning required by the sentence.
Question 325Question

The archivist carefully examined the ancient manuscript, scanning the pages with a close look to search for any signs of water damage.

Which choice most effectively eliminates redundancy in the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Answer: scanning the pages for water damage

Answer

scanning the pages for water damage
The correct choice is the most concise option that eliminates redundant synonyms while maintaining proper sentence structure.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Identify the redundant elements in the original underlined portion of the sentence.
The words 'scanning,' 'close look,' and 'search for' all express the same basic concept of detailed inspection.
Redundancy occurs when synonyms or phrases with identical meanings are repeated unnecessarily.
2
Evaluate the choices to find the option that is most concise while remaining grammatically correct.
The option containing 'scanning the pages for water damage' removes the repetitive phrases and maintains a grammatically correct participial modifier.
The correct answer must eliminate redundant phrasing without introducing new grammatical errors, such as comma splices or fragments.

Key Concept

Eliminating Redundancy
Estimated Time:1m 0s
Question 326Question

Although the single-celled slime mold *Physarum polycephalum* lacks a brain or nervous system, it exhibits a form of primitive intelligence. In experiments, researchers have observed the organism navigating complex mazes to locate food sources, choosing the shortest path with remarkable efficiency. To achieve this, the slime mold leaves behind a trail of extracellular slime as it explores. Upon encountering its own previous trails, the mold avoids them, using the slime as a spatial memory system to prevent it from wandering into areas it has already searched. This externalized memory system demonstrates that complex problem-solving behaviors do not necessarily require a highly developed central nervous system; rather, the mold relies on a totally cool externalized trick to get around.

Which choice best maintains the established tone and style of the passage?

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Answer: the organism employs a sophisticated mechanism to guide its movement

Answer

the organism employs a sophisticated mechanism to guide its movement
The correct option, which states that the organism employs a sophisticated mechanism to guide its movement, successfully aligns with the formal, objective, and academic tone established in the rest of the passage. It is also clear, precise, and concise.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Analyze the established tone of the passage.
The passage maintains a formal, objective, and scientific tone (using terms like 'Physarum polycephalum,' 'extracellular slime,' and 'spatial memory system').
Stylistic appropriateness requires any replacement to align with this established academic register.
2
Evaluate the underlined portion.
The phrase 'relies on a totally cool externalized trick to get around' is identified as highly informal and colloquial.
Identifying the stylistic clash confirms that a change is necessary.
3
Assess the options to find the one that fits the passage's tone while being concise and grammatically correct.
The phrasing 'the organism employs a sophisticated mechanism to guide its movement' is formal, concise, and stylistically appropriate.
This option restores stylistic consistency without wordiness or overly dramatic language.

Key Concept

Stylistic Appropriateness
Question 327Question

A portion of the passage below is underlined.

In 1956, Malcom McLean, a former trucking magnate, revolutionized global trade by introducing the modern shipping container. Before this innovation, cargo was loaded piece by piece, a process that was incredibly slow and expensive. McLean’s standardized steel boxes could be easily transferred from trucks to trains to ships, which was an efficient method that served to drastically reduce both loading times and shipping costs by a significant margin. Today, millions of these containers traverse the globe, forming the backbone of international commerce.

Which choice most effectively and concisely expresses the underlined idea?

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Answer: ships, drastically reducing both loading times and shipping costs.

Answer

ships, drastically reducing both loading times and shipping costs.
The correct option is the most concise and direct phrasing that maintains grammatical correctness. It uses a participle clause to cleanly show the result of the standardized boxes being easily transferred, avoiding redundant words like 'efficient method' or 'significant margin'.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Identify redundancy and wordiness in the original sentence.
The phrase 'which was an efficient method that served to... by a significant margin' is highly repetitive and adds unnecessary length.
ACT English questions require the most concise and direct phrasing that is grammatically correct.
2
Evaluate the answer choices for conciseness and grammatical structure.
The option containing the participle 'drastically reducing' expresses the exact same idea in a fraction of the words and fits smoothly into the sentence structure without creating punctuation errors.
Eliminating wordiness while keeping the sentence grammatically sound is the primary goal of this question type.

Key Concept

Eliminating Wordiness
Estimated Time:1m 0s
Question 328Question

For decades, the geological origins of the massive sarsen stones at Stonehenge remained a mystery to archaeologists. However, a recent chemical analysis has finally revealed the source where the stones originally came from. Which choice is the best replacement for the underlined portion?

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Answer: the stones' origin

Answer

the stones' origin
The option containing 'the stones' origin' is correct because it communicates the intended meaning of geographic origin in the most concise manner possible, eliminating the repetitive terms present in the original sentence.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Analyze the underlined portion for redundant phrasing.
The phrase 'the source where the stones originally came from' contains redundant elements, as 'source', 'where', 'originally', and 'came from' all express the same concept.
ACT English requires the elimination of repetitive words or phrases that do not add new meaning.
2
Evaluate the remaining options for conciseness and grammatical correctness.
The option containing 'the stones' origin' is grammatically correct and eliminates all redundancy. The other options either retain redundancy or introduce errors such as sentence fragments and comma splices.
The correct answer must be the most concise option that is also grammatically correct.

Key Concept

Eliminating Redundancy
Estimated Time:45s
Question 329Question

In 1964, the research submersible *Alvin* was commissioned, allowing scientists to explore the deep ocean floor. Previously before this time, marine biologists relied on indirect measurements; they had no way to observe the abyss directly.

Which of the following is the best version of the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Answer: Previously, marine biologists relied on indirect measurements;

Answer

Previously, marine biologists relied on indirect measurements;
The correct answer removes the redundant phrase 'before this time' because 'Previously' already communicates that this happened in the past. It also correctly retains the semicolon to separate the two independent clauses.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Identify the redundant elements in the original underlined portion.
The words 'Previously' and 'before this time' are redundant because they both express the exact same temporal relationship.
ACT style guides require eliminating unnecessary words that repeat the same meaning.
2
Evaluate the remaining options for grammatical correctness and correct clause separation.
The option using a comma instead of a semicolon creates a comma splice. The option starting with 'Because' creates a dependent clause fragment before the semicolon. Only the option containing 'Previously,' followed by a semicolon is grammatically correct and concise.
The correct choice must eliminate redundancy without introducing errors in punctuation or sentence structure.

Key Concept

Eliminating redundancy involves removing words or phrases that repeat information already expressed in the sentence, while ensuring the sentence structure remains grammatically sound.
Estimated Time:1m 0s
Question 330Question

Every autumn, millions of monarch butterflies embark on a perilous journey from North America to the forests of central Mexico. This annual migration occurs on a yearly basis, it is essential for their survival during the cold winter months.

Which of the following alternatives to the underlined portion is the most appropriate?

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Answer: This migration

Answer

This migration
The correct option is the most concise and direct phrasing. Because the first sentence already establishes that the migration happens 'Every autumn,' repeating this time frame with words like 'annual' or 'yearly' is redundant. Removing these redundant terms and the pronoun that follows creates a grammatically sound, complete sentence.

Step-by-Step Solution

1
Identify the redundant element in the underlined portion.
The word 'annual' and the phrase 'on a yearly basis' are redundant because they mean the same thing. Furthermore, the first sentence already states that the event happens 'Every autumn', making any repetition of its yearly frequency unnecessary.
ACT English questions prioritize conciseness and clarity, requiring the elimination of repetitive words or ideas.
2
Evaluate the remaining options for grammatical correctness and conciseness.
Removing the redundant elements and the pronoun 'it' allows the subject 'This migration' to connect directly to the verb 'is', creating a complete and grammatically correct sentence: 'This migration is essential for their survival...'
Eliminating redundant words must not introduce grammatical errors such as fragments or comma splices.

Key Concept

Eliminating Redundancy
Estimated Time:1m 0s
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