In 1957, engineers Alfred Fielding and Marc Chavannes sealed two plastic shower curtains together, creating a sheet of trapped air bubbles. They initially attempted to market this textured material as a fashionable wallpaper, but the product did not sell. Next, they pitched it as insulation for greenhouses, which also proved unsuccessful. [1] Greenhouses are typically constructed of glass or plastic to allow sunlight to heat the plants inside. Finally, in 1960, IBM began using the material—now trademarked as Bubble Wrap—to protect its new computers during shipping, establishing its success as packaging material.
The writer is considering deleting Sentence 1 from the passage. Should this sentence be deleted?
- ANo, because it explains the scientific reasoning behind why Bubble Wrap makes effective greenhouse insulation.
- BYes, because it repeats information about plastic that is already mentioned in the first sentence of the passage.
- CNo, because it provides a necessary transition between the inventors' failed wallpaper idea and their success with IBM.
- Yes, because it provides an unnecessary definition of a greenhouse that is irrelevant to the paragraph's focus on the development and marketing of Bubble Wrap.Cevap
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Yes, because it provides an unnecessary definition of a greenhouse that is irrelevant to the paragraph's focus on the development and marketing of Bubble Wrap.
The correct option correctly states that Sentence 1 should be deleted because it introduces an unnecessary definition of a greenhouse that is irrelevant to the paragraph's focus on the development and marketing of Bubble Wrap. The passage details the history of Bubble Wrap, and a general definition of what a greenhouse is does not support this narrative.
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