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In 1886, Josephine Cochrane, a wealthy socialite frustrated by her servants chipping her fine china during hand-washing, patented the first commercially successful automatic dishwasher. Unlike previous inventors who used manual scrubbers, Cochrane designed a machine that utilized high water pressure to clean dishes. [1] She founded a company to manufacture her invention, which initially marketed the machine primarily to restaurants and hotels due to its large size and high cost. It was not until the mid-twentieth century that smaller, consumer-friendly models became standard in residential kitchens.

The writer is considering adding the following sentence at point [1]:
"Cochrane’s husband, William, was a successful local politician and merchant who assisted in financing her initial prototype."

Should the writer make this addition?

  1. A
    Yes, because it provides crucial background information about Cochrane's financial resources and business partnerships.
  2. B
    Yes, because it establishes a transition from the mechanical operation of the machine to Cochrane’s subsequent entrepreneurial efforts.
  3. No, because it introduces details about Cochrane's husband that distract from the paragraph's focus on the development and marketing of the dishwasher.Cevap
  4. D
    No, because it contradicts the paragraph's assertion that Cochrane was a wealthy socialite.

Cevap

No, because it introduces details about Cochrane's husband that distract from the paragraph's focus on the development and marketing of the dishwasher.
The correct option identifies that the sentence should not be added because it introduces details about Cochrane's husband that distract from the paragraph's primary focus on the development, design, and commercialization of the dishwasher.

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1
Analyze the main focus of the paragraph.
The paragraph details the invention, mechanical design, and commercial history of Josephine Cochrane's automatic dishwasher.
Establishing the central theme helps determine whether new information contributes to or detracts from the paragraph's unity.
2
Evaluate the relevance of the proposed sentence.
The proposed sentence introduces details about Cochrane's husband's career and financial assistance.
Evaluating the sentence content shows that it introduces biographical details unrelated to the dishwasher's technology or market trajectory.
3
Select the correct decision and logical justification.
The sentence should not be added because it distracts from the primary focus of the paragraph, matching the option that advises against the addition due to this distraction.
Choosing the option that correctly identifies the distraction maintains the paragraph's cohesive focus.

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