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Zorluk: ZorSentence Addition and Deletion Decisions

[1] In the mid-nineteenth century, the construction of the transcontinental railroad transformed the American West, linking the Atlantic and Pacific coasts. [2] The project relied heavily on the labor of thousands of Chinese immigrants, who faced dangerous working conditions and severe discrimination. [3] These workers blasted tunnels through the granite of the Sierra Nevada and laid tracks across the desolate Great Basin. [4] Meanwhile, in the eastern United States, steam locomotives were rapidly replacing canal boats as the primary means of moving freight. [5] Despite their critical contributions, the Chinese workers were excluded from the celebratory photographs taken at Promontory Summit upon the railroad's completion.

The writer is considering deleting Sentence 4 from the paragraph. Should this sentence be kept or deleted?

  1. A
    kept, because it establishes a transition that connects the localized construction in the West with the broader national transport networks of the era.
  2. B
    kept, because it provides critical historical background explaining why steam power was necessary to cross the Sierra Nevada.
  3. deleted, because it interrupts the paragraph's focus on the transcontinental railroad's construction and the experiences of its Chinese workers.Cevap
  4. D
    deleted, because it contradicts the paragraph's earlier assertion that the railroad successfully linked the Atlantic and Pacific coasts.

Cevap

deleted, because it interrupts the paragraph's focus on the transcontinental railroad's construction and the experiences of its Chinese workers.
The correct answer is the option stating that the sentence should be deleted because it interrupts the paragraph's focus on the transcontinental railroad's construction and the experiences of its Chinese workers. Sentence 4 describes a transition from canal boats to locomotives in the eastern United States, which is unrelated to the specific challenges and contributions of Chinese immigrant workers in the American West.

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1
Determine the primary focus of the paragraph.
The paragraph focuses on the construction of the transcontinental railroad in the American West and the labor, hardships, and exclusion of Chinese immigrant workers.
Establishing the central theme allows us to evaluate whether Sentence 4 supports or disrupts the unity of the paragraph.
2
Analyze the content and role of Sentence 4.
Sentence 4 describes a shift in the eastern United States from canal boats to steam locomotives for moving freight.
We must understand the specific detail introduced by the sentence to see if it aligns with the paragraph's focus.
3
Assess the relevance of Sentence 4 to the paragraph's focus.
Sentence 4 shifts the geographic location to the East and the topic to general transportation logistics, which is off-topic and interrupts the narrative flow about Chinese laborers in the West.
Identifying this shift reveals that the sentence is irrelevant and should be deleted.
4
Select the option that correctly recommends deletion and provides the accurate justification.
The option recommending deletion because the sentence interrupts the paragraph's focus on the transcontinental railroad and its Chinese workers is correct.
Both the decision to delete and the justification must be logically sound and text-dependent.

Anahtar Kavram

Evaluating sentence relevance for addition or deletion decisions based on paragraph focus and unity.
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