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[1] For centuries, scientists have marveled at the durability of ancient Roman concrete, which has survived for two millennia in harsh marine environments. [2] In contrast, modern concrete structures often begin to degrade within a few decades. [3] Recently, researchers discovered that the secret to this longevity lies in 'lime clasts'—small, white mineral chunks found throughout the ancient material. [4] The researchers used high-resolution electron microscopes to analyze the samples in their campus laboratories. [5] Previously dismissed as evidence of poor mixing, these clasts actually provide a self-healing mechanism when water enters cracks in the concrete, reacting to block further damage.

The writer is considering deleting Sentence 4 from the passage. Should this sentence be kept or deleted?

  1. A
    Kept, because it provides necessary context regarding the scientific methodology used to study the concrete.
  2. B
    Kept, because it explains the physical mechanism that allows the lime clasts to heal cracks in the concrete.
  3. Deleted, because it interrupts the explanation of the concrete's durability with irrelevant details about laboratory equipment.Cevap
  4. D
    Deleted, because it repeats information about the discovery of the lime clasts that is already stated earlier in the paragraph.

Cevap

Deleted, because it interrupts the explanation of the concrete's durability with irrelevant details about laboratory equipment.
The correct answer is the option stating that the sentence should be deleted because it interrupts the explanation of the concrete's durability with irrelevant details about laboratory equipment. The paragraph explains why ancient Roman concrete is highly durable, specifically highlighting the recent discovery of 'lime clasts' and how they provide a self-healing mechanism. Sentence 4 introduces tangential information about the specific laboratory equipment (high-resolution electron microscopes) and location of the study, which interrupts the logical explanation of the concrete's chemistry.

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1
Identify the primary topic and focus of the paragraph.
The paragraph explains why ancient Roman concrete is highly durable, specifically highlighting the recent discovery of 'lime clasts' and how they provide a self-healing mechanism.
Understanding the core topic is necessary to evaluate whether Sentence 4 is relevant or disruptive to the flow.
2
Analyze the content of Sentence 4.
Sentence 4 mentions that researchers used high-resolution electron microscopes in their laboratories to analyze concrete samples.
Evaluating the proposed sentence determines whether it directly supports the paragraph's focus or introduces tangential information.
3
Evaluate the relevance of Sentence 4 and choose the best option.
Since details about laboratory microscopes are irrelevant to the chemical self-healing mechanism of Roman concrete, the sentence should be deleted because it interrupts the explanation of the concrete's durability.
Comparing the sentence's function to the paragraph's purpose reveals that deleting it maintains cohesion and focus.

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