Soru

Zorluk: KolaySelecting Concluding Sentences and Transitions

In 1943, mechanical engineer Richard James was working in a Philadelphia shipyard, attempting to develop springs that could support and stabilize sensitive marine instruments. During his experiments, he accidentally knocked a tension spring off a shelf. Instead of simply falling to the ground, the spring stepped down from a stack of books, onto a table, and coiled itself upright on the floor. James spent the next two years determining the perfect steel wire tension to turn this accidental movement into a children's toy, which his wife, Betty, named the "Slinky." [1]

The writer wants to conclude the paragraph with a sentence that highlights how a simple accident in a shipyard led to a successful, enduring commercial product. Which choice best accomplishes this goal?

  1. A
    Betty James would later run the toy company for decades, moving its primary manufacturing facilities to Pennsylvania in 1965.
  2. B
    The toy became an instant hit, millions of units have been sold worldwide since its debut.
  3. Ultimately, this simple shipyard accident launched one of the most popular and enduring toys in history.Cevap
  4. D
    Ultimately, the simple accident, that occurred in the shipyard, launched a beloved classic.

Cevap

Ultimately, this simple shipyard accident launched one of the most popular and enduring toys in history.
The correct option perfectly aligns with the prompt's instructions by identifying both the initial event (the simple shipyard accident) and the long-term success (one of the most popular and enduring toys in history) without grammatical errors.

Adım Adım Çözüm

1
Analyze the question stem to identify the specific rhetorical goal.
The goal is to conclude the paragraph by showing how a simple accident in a shipyard resulted in a successful, enduring commercial product.
Understanding the precise criteria of the prompt is essential for evaluating concluding options on the ACT.
2
Evaluate the choices for both thematic relevance to the goal and grammatical correctness.
The option focusing on Betty James's later life introduces irrelevant details. The option mentioning millions of units sold contains a comma splice. The option placing commas around the restrictive clause 'that occurred in the shipyard' contains a punctuation error. The option mentioning the simple shipyard accident and the popular, enduring toy is both grammatically correct and directly relevant.
Correct answers on the ACT English section must be both grammatically correct and rhetorically appropriate.

Anahtar Kavram

Selecting Concluding Sentences and Transitions
Bu soruyu puanla