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Zorluk: Çok zorEliminating Wordiness

In 1912, Austrian physicist Victor Hess ascended in a balloon to measure radiation levels at high altitudes, expecting them to decrease. Instead, he discovered that ionizing radiation actually increased with altitude. Hess proved that radiation did not emanate from the Earth itself, which was a hypothesis that had been proposed by earlier scientists, but instead, it came from outer space.

Which choice most effectively and concisely expresses the information in the underlined portion of the sentence?

  1. A
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  2. Hess proved that radiation came from outer space rather than from the Earth, as earlier scientists had hypothesized.Cevap
  3. C
    Hess proved that radiation came from outer space rather than from the Earth, this was hypothesized by earlier scientists.
  4. D
    Hess proved that radiation came from outer space rather than from the Earth, a hypothesis, that earlier scientists had proposed.

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Hess proved that radiation came from outer space rather than from the Earth, as earlier scientists had hypothesized.
The correct choice is the most concise option that preserves the original meaning and is grammatically correct. It eliminates the wordy passive clause ('which was a hypothesis that had been proposed...') and uses the active and direct phrasing 'as earlier scientists had hypothesized' to contrast with Hess's findings.

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1
Identify the wordy and repetitive elements in the underlined portion of the sentence.
The original phrasing contains redundant and passive expressions such as 'did not emanate from... but instead, it came from' and 'which was a hypothesis that had been proposed by earlier scientists'.
ACT English tests reward conciseness and direct, active voice constructions when they convey the same meaning.
2
Evaluate the choices for conciseness and grammatical correctness.
The correct choice conveys the contrast and hypothesis concisely. Other options introduce grammatical errors such as comma splices or incorrect punctuation around restrictive clauses.
Shorter options must still be grammatically correct and retain the intended meaning of the original sentence.

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Eliminating Wordiness
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