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[1]
In the mid-nineteenth century, a sculptor named Edmonia Lewis defied societal expectations to achieve international acclaim. Born to a Native American mother and an Afro-Haitian father, Lewis was orphaned at a young age. Despite facing intense prejudice, she eventually traveled to Rome, Italy, where she joined a vibrant community of expatriate artists and sculpted in neoclassical marble. Her work drew inspiration from both her heritage and contemporary social movements, such as the abolition of slavery.

[2]
Lewis’s Rome studio became a popular stop for wealthy travelers on the Grand Tour, who marveled at her ability to breathe life into cold stone. Unlike many of her contemporaries, who hired local Italian artisans to carve their plaster models into marble, Lewis did all her carving herself. She feared that if she did not perform the labor, critics would attribute her achievements to male assistants. Consequently, her dedication to her craft resulted in striking works like *The Death of Cleopatra*, a massive, realistic sculpture that captivated audiences at the 1876 Centennial Exposition in Philadelphia.

[3]
For decades after her death in 1907, much of Lewis's work was lost or forgotten, and *The Death of Cleopatra* was even found in a Chicago salvage yard before being restored. Today, museums around the world display her sculptures, celebrating her pioneering role as a woman of color in the fine arts. She is remembered not just as a skilled artisan but as an artist who carved her own path through history. __________

The writer wants to conclude the passage by emphasizing Lewis's lasting legacy and the theme of overcoming adversity. Which choice best accomplishes this goal?

  1. Through her resilience and artistic brilliance, Lewis ensured that her voice would be heard across generations.Cevap
  2. B
    Although her path was filled with formidable obstacles; Lewis ultimately achieved a permanent place in the history of art.
  3. C
    She eventually passed away in London, where she had spent her final years working on smaller clay figures.
  4. D
    She was a totally awesome artist who showed the world that nothing could stop her.

Cevap

The option stating that Lewis's resilience and artistic brilliance ensured her voice would be heard across generations is the correct answer.
The option stating that Lewis's resilience and artistic brilliance ensured her voice would be heard across generations is correct because it directly addresses the writer's dual goals. 'Resilience' highlights the theme of overcoming adversity, while 'her voice would be heard across generations' emphasizes her lasting legacy. It does so in a grammatically correct format and maintains the formal biographical tone of the passage.

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1
Identify the writer's goals
The final sentence must emphasize Lewis's lasting legacy and the theme of overcoming adversity.
This establishes the rhetorical criteria specified in the question stem.
2
Evaluate the choices for grammatical correctness
The choice beginning with 'Although her path' contains a punctuation error (semicolon separating a dependent clause).
Eliminating grammatically incorrect options narrows down the choices.
3
Evaluate the content and tone of the remaining choices
The choice beginning with 'She eventually passed away' introduces new details instead of concluding, and the choice beginning with 'She was a totally awesome' uses an inappropriately informal tone.
This rules out choices that violate cohesion and register standards.
4
Select the choice that best fulfills all criteria
The choice starting with 'Through her resilience' is correct, formal, and covers both requested themes.
It successfully completes the passage with a strong, thematic conclusion.

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