Consider the underlined portion in the sentence below:
While analyzing atmospheric data collected by high-altitude balloons, meteorologists recorded sudden, dramatic temperature shifts, gathered detailed readings, and published their findings in a peer-reviewed journal.
Which of the following alternatives to the underlined portion is grammatically correct?
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- Bsudden, dramatic temperature shifts, they gathered detailed readings, and published
- Csudden, dramatic, temperature shifts, gathered detailed readings, and published
- Dsudden, dramatic temperature shifts; gathered detailed readings, and published
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NO CHANGE is the correct choice because it maintains proper comma usage between coordinate adjectives and correctly punctuates items in a parallel series.
The original phrasing correctly applies a comma between the coordinate adjectives 'sudden' and 'dramatic' while avoiding an unnecessary comma between 'dramatic' and the noun 'temperature shifts'. Furthermore, it properly uses serial commas to separate the three parallel verb phrases in the compound predicate ('recorded...', 'gathered...', and 'published...').
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Commas with Coordinate Adjectives and Parallel Series
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