Knowledge of Language

330 soru

Soru 21Soru

In the early twentieth century, astronomer Henrietta Swan Leavitt analyzed photographic plates of variable stars in the Magellanic Clouds, calculating and computing the changing brightness of these stars, which varied in luminosity over time, she discovered the period-luminosity relation.

Which choice most effectively and concisely completes the sentence?

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Cevap: and, by calculating their varying brightness, she

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The correct answer is the option that reads 'and, by calculating their varying brightness, she'. This option is the most concise and grammatically correct choice because it eliminates the redundant phrasing of the original sentence and correctly connects the two independent clauses with the coordinating conjunction 'and' to avoid a comma splice.
The correct option is the one that reads 'and, by calculating their varying brightness, she'. It removes all redundant synonyms ('calculating and computing') and repetitive descriptions ('changing brightness... which varied in luminosity over time') while introducing the coordinating conjunction 'and' to properly connect two independent clauses and resolve the comma splice.

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1
Analyze the original sentence for redundancy and wordiness.
The phrase 'calculating and computing' uses redundant synonyms, and 'changing brightness... which varied in luminosity over time' repeats the same concept of change unnecessarily.
Standardized grammar tests require eliminating redundant words and phrases that repeat the same idea.
2
Analyze the sentence structure to ensure grammatical correctness.
The sentence consists of two independent clauses: Leavitt analyzed photographic plates, and she discovered the period-luminosity relation. Simply joining them with a comma creates a comma splice.
Independent clauses must be joined by a coordinating conjunction (like 'and') and a comma, or a semicolon.
3
Evaluate the choices to find the one that is both concise and grammatically correct.
The option beginning with 'and, by' resolves the wordiness by shortening the phrase to 'calculating their varying brightness' and uses 'and' to correct the comma splice. The option without 'and' is concise but creates a comma splice, while the option with 'which was performed by her' is wordy and passive.
The correct choice must be the most concise option that is also grammatically correct.

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Eliminating Wordiness
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Soru 22Soru

Before the invention of modern refrigeration, food preservation relied heavily on salting and curing techniques. Each year, people repeated these practices annually during the autumn months to prepare for winter.

Which choice is the best version of the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Cevap: People repeated these practices

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People repeated these practices
The correct answer successfully removes the redundant words 'Each year' and 'annually', conveying the idea of repetition clearly and concisely without grammar errors.

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1
Identify the redundant elements in the underlined portion of the passage.
The original phrasing contains both 'Each year' and 'annually', which repeat the same idea of yearly repetition.
Good writing avoids using synonyms that repeat information within the same clause.
2
Evaluate the choices to select the one that resolves the redundancy without introducing new grammatical errors.
The phrase 'People repeated these practices' is concise and grammatically sound. The other options either maintain the redundancy, introduce a comma splice, or create a sentence fragment.
The correct answer must be both grammatically correct and concise.

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Eliminating Redundancy
Soru 23Soru

Aerogel, a synthetic ultralight material derived from a gel, consists of more than 99 percent air. Despite its light weight, it is remarkably strong and can support thousands of times its own mass. Because of its properties as an insulator, which insulate against heat, it is used by aerospace engineers for insulation in spacecraft.

Which choice most effectively and concisely expresses the information in the underlined portion?

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Cevap: Because it insulates against heat, aerospace engineers use it in spacecraft.

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Because it insulates against heat, aerospace engineers use it in spacecraft.
The correct answer is the most concise and direct option. It eliminates the repetitive use of 'insulator,' 'insulate,' and 'insulation' found in the original sentence, and uses an active voice structure that is grammatically complete.

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1
Identify the redundant and wordy elements in the original sentence.
The words 'properties as an insulator,' 'insulate against heat,' and 'insulation' repeat the same concept redundantly.
ACT English requires eliminating unnecessary repetition to improve clarity and flow.
2
Evaluate the choices to find the one that removes redundancy while maintaining a complete sentence.
The correct choice must express the relationship clearly using active voice and without fragmenting the sentence.
Conciseness should not come at the expense of grammatical correctness.

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Eliminating Wordiness
Soru 24Soru

In the mid-twentieth century, geologist Marie Tharp painstakingly plotted sonar data to map the ocean floor, revealing a massive rift valley running down the center of the Atlantic. This discovery supported the theory of continental drift, which had previously been dismissed by many scientists. Through her careful charting of the ocean floor, Tharp was able to create the first comprehensive map of the ocean bottom, which was a major breakthrough that transformed the field of oceanography.

Which choice, if substituted for the underlined portion, makes the sentence the most concise while remaining grammatically correct?

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Cevap: By mapping the ocean floor, Tharp created a breakthrough that

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The correct choice is the most concise option that avoids redundancy and maintains grammatical correctness: 'By mapping the ocean floor, Tharp created a breakthrough that'.
The correct choice is the most concise option because it eliminates the repetitive synonyms ('ocean floor' and 'ocean bottom') and uses the direct active construction 'Tharp created a breakthrough' instead of wordy relative clauses.

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1
Analyze the underlined portion for wordiness and redundancy.
The original phrasing repeats the concept of mapping the bottom/floor ('charting of the ocean floor' and 'map of the ocean bottom') and uses wordy, indirect constructions ('was able to create', 'which was a major breakthrough that').
Identifying redundancy and wordiness helps narrow down the choices to the most direct option.
2
Evaluate the choices for conciseness and clarity.
The phrasing starting with 'By mapping the ocean floor' conveys the same information in fewer words, using active verbs and removing repetitive terms.
The ACT English section favors the most direct and clear phrasing that keeps the original meaning.
3
Check the concise choices for grammatical correctness.
The choice using a comma splice and the choice creating a sentence fragment are grammatically incorrect, leaving the chosen active phrasing as the only correct, concise option.
An option must be both concise and grammatically correct to be the right answer.

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Eliminating wordiness and redundancy while maintaining correct sentence structure
Soru 25Soru

Biologists studying deep-sea hydrothermal vents discovered a species of extremophile shrimp that thrives in superheated water. Although these organisms are currently existing today in environments that would kill most marine species, they have developed unique proteins to stabilize their cellular structure.

Which of the following choices, if substituted for the underlined portion, best eliminates the redundancy in the sentence?

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Cevap: Although these organisms exist in environments

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The correct choice is the option that states 'Although these organisms exist in environments' because it eliminates the redundant time indicators and maintains proper sentence structure.
The correct choice, which begins with 'Although these organisms exist in environments', successfully removes the redundant words 'currently' and 'today' while maintaining the subordinating conjunction 'Although' to properly link the dependent clause with the independent clause.

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1
Identify the redundant words in the underlined portion.
The words 'currently', 'existing', and 'today' all convey the exact same meaning of present existence.
To recognize which elements are unnecessary and should be removed to make the sentence concise.
2
Test the remaining choices in the context of the full sentence to evaluate grammatical correctness.
Removing the subordinating conjunction 'Although' creates a comma splice, while adding 'Because' turns the entire sentence into a fragment. Only the correct option maintains the appropriate subordinating structure.
To ensure that eliminating redundancy does not introduce a new grammatical error.

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Eliminating Redundancy
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Soru 26Soru

Although the summit of Mount Everest is the highest point on Earth, the climb is incredibly perilous. Due to the fact that the weather is extremely cold, climbers must wear specialized gear to prevent frostbite.

Which choice most effectively eliminates wordiness from the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Cevap: Because of the extreme cold,

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Because of the extreme cold,
The correct answer is the most concise option that preserves the original meaning and is grammatically correct. It replaces the wordy clause 'Due to the fact that the weather is extremely cold' with the clear, direct prepositional phrase 'Because of the extreme cold,' smoothly connecting the cause to the main clause of the sentence.

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1
Analyze the underlined portion for conciseness and clarity, identifying any unnecessary wordiness or redundancy.
The original phrasing 'Due to the fact that the weather is extremely cold' contains the bloated, wordy phrase 'Due to the fact that' when a simpler transition could be used.
Identifying wordy constructions helps determine which parts of the sentence need simplification.
2
Evaluate the remaining choices to find the most concise option that is grammatically correct and preserves the original meaning.
The option stating 'Because of the extreme cold' conveys the exact same cause-and-effect relationship in a much shorter, more direct manner without introducing grammatical errors or redundant synonyms.
Selecting the most concise and grammatically correct option is the primary goal of this question type on the ACT.

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Eliminating Wordiness
Soru 27Soru

At Chichén Itzá, the Mayan pyramid known as El Castillo produces a striking acoustic effect: a handclap at the base of the stairs triggers a chirping echo that mimics the sacred quetzal bird. This unique chirping sound is believed by researchers to have been an intentional creation that the ancient architects planned on purpose by designing steps of varying depths.

Which choice most effectively and concisely expresses the underlined portion?

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Cevap: Researchers believe the architects intentionally created this sound by designing steps of varying depths.

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Researchers believe the architects intentionally created this sound by designing steps of varying depths.
The correct option is the most concise and direct way to express the idea. It changes the passive construction 'is believed by researchers' to the active 'Researchers believe' and removes the redundant repetitions of 'planned,' 'intentional,' and 'on purpose,' using only the word 'intentionally' to convey the design's deliberate nature.

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1
Identify wordiness and redundancy in the underlined text.
The phrase 'is believed by researchers' is passive, and 'intentional,' 'planned,' and 'on purpose' are redundant synonyms.
ACT English prioritizes concise and active phrasing.
2
Evaluate the choices for grammatical correctness.
One option introduces a comma splice by joining two independent clauses with a comma, and another introduces a fragment by starting with 'Because' without a main clause.
Eliminating wordiness cannot come at the expense of proper sentence structure.
3
Select the correct option that is both concise and grammatically sound.
The active-voice phrasing stating that 'Researchers believe the architects intentionally created...' is correct.
It removes all passive and redundant phrasing while maintaining complete, correct grammar.

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Eliminating Wordiness
Soru 28Soru

Because the team was short on time, they decided to collaborate together in cooperation to finish the project.

Which choice is the most concise and grammatically correct option for the underlined portion?

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Cevap: they decided to collaborate

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they decided to collaborate
The correct choice is the option that states 'they decided to collaborate' because it removes all redundant elements ('together' and 'in cooperation') while maintaining the grammatical integrity of the sentence.

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1
Identify the redundant words in the underlined portion.
The words 'collaborate,' 'together,' and 'in cooperation' all share the same meaning, which is working collectively.
Eliminating redundancy requires keeping only one of these terms to state the idea clearly without repetition.
2
Evaluate the choices to find the most concise version that is grammatically correct.
The option containing 'they decided to collaborate' removes the repetitive elements while keeping the main independent clause intact.
This ensures the sentence is both grammatically complete and free of redundant phrasing.

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Eliminating Redundancy
Soru 29Soru

Climatologists extract ice cores from deep within glaciers; these cylindrical samples of ice, which are shaped like cylinders, preserve tiny bubbles of ancient air, allowing researchers to measure greenhouse gas levels from hundreds of thousands of years ago.

Which of the following choices is the best edit to the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Cevap: ; these cylindrical samples preserve

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the option that uses a semicolon and eliminates the redundant description of the shape of the ice cores
The correct option is the most effective and concise edit because it removes the redundant phrase 'which are shaped like cylinders' (since 'cylindrical' already conveys this meaning) and correctly uses a semicolon to separate the two independent clauses.

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1
Identify the redundancy in the underlined portion.
The words 'cylindrical' and the phrase 'which are shaped like cylinders' are synonymous. One of them must be eliminated to make the sentence concise.
ACT English rewards concise and direct writing that avoids repeating the same meaning.
2
Analyze the grammatical structure of the sentence.
The sentence consists of two independent clauses: 'Climatologists extract ice cores from deep within glaciers' and 'these cylindrical samples preserve tiny bubbles of ancient air'.
Identifying clause boundaries helps determine the correct punctuation needed to connect them.
3
Evaluate the punctuation choices linking the two independent clauses.
A semicolon is required to separate the two independent clauses without a coordinating conjunction. Using a comma creates a comma splice, and adding 'because' after the semicolon creates a fragment.
Standard English conventions require independent clauses to be joined by a semicolon, a period, or a comma with a coordinating conjunction.

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Eliminating Redundancy
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Soru 30Soru

The restoration of the historic theater was delayed by several weeks because the plaster conservator had to meticulously repair the ornate ceiling, which was a time-consuming process that took a long time to complete.

Which of the following is the best choice for the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Cevap: a time-consuming process.

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a time-consuming process.
The option stating 'a time-consuming process' is correct because it is concise and grammatically correct. It eliminates the redundant phrasing of the original sentence, which repeated the same concept using both 'time-consuming' and 'took a long time to complete'.

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1
Identify the redundancy in the underlined portion of the sentence.
The phrase 'time-consuming' and 'took a long time to complete' mean the same thing, making one of them redundant.
Redundancy occurs when two words or phrases with the same meaning are used in the same context, and the ACT requires the most concise, error-free phrasing.
2
Evaluate the remaining options for grammatical correctness and conciseness.
The option containing a comma splice and the option containing a fragment are grammatically incorrect, leaving the most concise, error-free option.
Eliminating grammatically incorrect distractors ensures the final choice is both grammatically sound and concise.

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Eliminating Redundancy
Soru 31Soru

In 1856, eighteen-year-old chemist William Henry Perkin was attempting to synthesize quinine, a treatment for malaria, in his home laboratory. Instead of quinine, he produced a dark, sticky sludge that turned out to be the first synthetic aniline dye. He noticed that the sludge had a rich purple color when it was dissolved in alcohol, which was a purple color that had never been produced artificially before. Perkin quickly patented the process, launching the modern synthetic dye industry.

Which choice most effectively and concisely expresses the information in the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Cevap: He noticed that the sludge, when dissolved in alcohol, produced a rich purple color never before created artificially.

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He noticed that the sludge, when dissolved in alcohol, produced a rich purple color never before created artificially.
The correct option is the most concise and direct choice. It uses active construction ('the sludge... produced a rich purple color') and avoids repeating the word 'purple' or using wordy prepositional phrases.

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1
Analyze the underlined portion for redundant phrasing and wordiness.
The phrase 'which was a purple color' repeats the word 'purple' from the first half of the clause, creating clear redundancy.
To satisfy ACT writing standards, wordiness and redundancy must be eliminated.
2
Evaluate the choices for grammatical correctness and conciseness.
One option is wordy and passive, and another contains a comma splice. The option starting with 'He noticed that the sludge, when dissolved' expresses the same meaning in fewer words without introducing grammatical errors.
The correct answer must be both grammatically sound and the most concise option that preserves the original meaning.

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Eliminating Wordiness
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Soru 32Soru

Each autumn, millions of monarch butterflies undertake a massive journey from North America to the forests of central Mexico. Due to the fact that they are possessed of a need to escape the cold winter temperatures, they travel up to three thousand miles to reach their nesting sites.

Which choice is the most concise and grammatically correct replacement for the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Cevap: To escape the cold winter temperatures,

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To escape the cold winter temperatures,
The correct answer provides the most concise and direct way of expressing the purpose of the butterflies' journey. It replaces a long, wordy dependent clause with a simple introductory infinitive phrase, avoiding passive constructions and retaining the original meaning.

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1
Analyze the underlined portion for conciseness and clarity.
The original phrase is wordy and uses passive constructions like 'possessed of a need to' and 'due to the fact that'.
ACT English prioritizes the most concise option that preserves meaning and maintains proper grammar.
2
Evaluate the grammar and conciseness of the other options.
The option starting with 'They escape' creates a comma splice. The option with 'that winter brings' is wordier than necessary and contains an incorrect comma before a restrictive clause. The option 'To escape the cold winter temperatures,' is both grammatically correct and the most concise.
This process eliminates grammatically incorrect or overly wordy distractors to find the best choice.

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Eliminating Wordiness
Tahmini Süre:40s
Soru 33Soru

In 1964, physicists Arno Penzias and Robert Wilson were troubled by a persistent, low-frequency hum picked up by their Holmdel horn antenna. After ruling out interference from urban area signals, they meticulously cleaned the giant instrument, scrubbing away nests left by roosting pigeons. However, their efforts to eliminate the noise were unsuccessful, because the static was still heard by them, persistently continuing. Eventually, they realized they had stumbled upon the cosmic microwave background radiation, the remnant glow of the Big Bang.

Which of the following choices is the best replacement for the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Cevap: However, they still heard the persistent static.

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However, they still heard the persistent static.
The correct option is the most concise and direct way to convey the information. It uses the active voice ('they still heard') and eliminates redundant descriptions of the static's persistent nature, while maintaining grammatical completeness.

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1
Identify the wordiness and redundancies in the original underlined sentence.
The phrase 'their efforts to eliminate the noise were unsuccessful' repeats the contrast established by 'however', and 'persistently continuing' repeats the meaning of 'static' and 'noise'. Additionally, 'was still heard by them' uses an wordy, passive construction.
Redundant and wordy phrasing must be eliminated to make the sentence clear and concise.
2
Evaluate the alternative choices for conciseness, tone, and grammatical correctness.
The option containing 'because' creates a dependent clause fragment. The option with 'which was a sound that persisted' contains a redundant relative clause. The option stating 'However, they still heard the persistent static.' is concise, active, and grammatically complete.
The correct choice must be grammatically complete and correct while conveying the original meaning in the most direct way possible.

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Eliminating Wordiness
Soru 34Soru

Although fireflies are best known for their glowing lanterns, not all species of these insects can actually produce light. Because of the reason that some species lack the chemical organs that are needed to glow, they rely on chemical scents called pheromones to find mates.

Which of the following is the best revision of the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Cevap: Because some species lack the chemical organs needed to glow,

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Because some species lack the chemical organs needed to glow,
The correct answer is the most concise and direct phrasing that maintains grammatical correctness. Replacing the wordy transition 'Because of the reason that' with 'Because' and simplifying the modifier 'that are needed to glow' to 'needed to glow' eliminates unnecessary wordiness without introducing any grammatical errors.

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1
Identify the wordiness and redundancies in the original sentence.
The phrase 'Because of the reason that' is wordy and redundant, as it can be simplified to just 'Because.' Similarly, the relative clause 'that are needed to glow' is wordier than necessary and can be reduced to the participial phrase 'needed to glow.'
ACT English questions prioritize clear, concise, and direct communication.
2
Evaluate the grammar of the concise options to ensure they do not introduce errors.
Removing the subordinating conjunction creates a comma splice by joining two independent clauses with only a comma. Adding a comma before 'that are needed to glow' creates a punctuation error because 'that' clauses are restrictive and should not be set off by commas. The version containing 'Because' and 'needed to glow' remains grammatically correct.
The correct option must be both concise and grammatically correct.

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Eliminating Wordiness
Soru 35Soru

To prepare for the concert, the pianist rehearsed the difficult concerto for hours. She focused on the final movement, which she practiced repeatedly over and over again to perfect her technique.

Which of the following choices best eliminates the redundancy in the underlined portion of the passage?

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Cevap: which she practiced

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The correct answer is the option that replaces the underlined text with 'which she practiced'.
The correct option is the most concise and direct phrasing. It removes the redundant synonyms 'repeatedly' and 'over and over again' while maintaining grammatical correctness.

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1
Identify the redundant phrasing in the underlined portion of the sentence.
The words 'repeatedly' and 'over and over again' carry the exact same meaning, making them redundant.
ACT English questions require eliminating wordiness and repetition.
2
Evaluate the remaining choices for conciseness and grammatical correctness.
The option containing 'which she practiced' is the most concise choice and contains no grammatical errors. Other choices introduce grammatical errors such as comma splices or fragments.
The correct answer must be both concise and grammatically correct.

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Eliminating Redundancy
Soru 36Soru

Many modern structures rely heavily on solar energy. The efficiency of these solar panels depends in the amount of sunlight they receive daily.

Which option is the best replacement for the underlined portion?

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Cevap: depends on

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depends on
The verb 'depend' is idiomatically followed by the preposition 'on' to show contingency or reliance. The choice 'depends on' is the only option that uses the correct preposition collocation.

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1
Identify the verb and preposition combination in the underlined portion.
The text uses the phrase 'depends in'.
To evaluate if the preposition 'in' is the correct idiomatic partner for the verb 'depend'.
2
Determine the correct idiomatic preposition that matches the context of reliance or contingency.
The verb 'depend' conventionally pairs with the preposition 'on' to show that one thing is contingent upon another.
English grammatical conventions dictate specific preposition pairings with certain verbs.
3
Compare the options and select the one that matches the correct idiomatic pairing.
The choice 'depends on' is correct, whereas the others use incorrect prepositions.
Selecting the correct preposition establishes proper idiomatic usage.

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Idiomatic Preposition Usage
Soru 37Soru

Linguists tracking the evolution of Indo-European languages have noted that sound shifts occur in highly predictable patterns; by studying these systematic changes, which proceed in an orderly fashion, researchers can reconstruct Proto-Indo-European, the ancestral tongue from which modern languages descended.

Which choice is the most effective and concise way to write the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Cevap: by studying these systematic changes, researchers

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The correct option is the one that reads 'by studying these systematic changes, researchers'. This choice is the most concise because it removes the redundant clause 'which proceed in an orderly fashion' (since 'systematic' already implies order) and maintains grammatical correctness.
The correct option is the most concise choice that is grammatically correct. It removes the redundant clause 'which proceed in an orderly fashion' because 'systematic' already describes something that is orderly and methodical. The resulting sentence flows logically and maintains proper punctuation.

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1
Identify the redundancy in the original underlined phrase.
The word 'systematic' and the relative clause 'which proceed in an orderly fashion' express the exact same concept.
Redundancy must be eliminated to make the sentence concise and direct.
2
Evaluate the options for conciseness and clarity.
Removing 'which proceed in an orderly fashion' yields 'by studying these systematic changes, researchers', which successfully eliminates the redundancy.
The most concise option that preserves meaning is correct, provided it does not introduce grammatical errors.
3
Verify the grammatical correctness of the remaining options.
The option beginning with 'because' creates a sentence fragment after the semicolon, and the option with 'they' creates a comma splice between two independent clauses. The concise option maintains proper sentence structure.
An option must be grammatically correct to be the final answer.

Anahtar Kavram

Eliminating Redundancy
Soru 38Soru

Although the young gymnast had trained for only a year, she proved she was capable to execute the difficult routine with ease. Her performance earned her a gold medal.

Which choice represents the most idiomatic phrasing for the underlined portion?

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Cevap: capable of executing

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capable of executing
The correct answer is 'capable of executing'. In standard written English, the adjective 'capable' must be followed by the preposition 'of' and a gerund (a verb ending in -ing). The phrasing 'capable of executing' is idiomatic, whereas 'capable to execute' is incorrect.

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1
Identify the underlined phrase and the word being modified.
The underlined phrase is 'capable to execute', where the adjective 'capable' is followed by an infinitive verb.
To determine if the preposition and verb form match standard idiomatic English usage.
2
Recall the idiomatic preposition and verb form that follow 'capable'.
The adjective 'capable' idiomatically pairs with the preposition 'of' and requires a gerund (verb ending in -ing).
To choose the option that conforms to standard English conventions.

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Idiomatic Word Choice
Tahmini Süre:45s
Soru 39Soru

Discovered in 1901 off the Greek island of Antikythera, the ancient bronze device known as the Antikythera mechanism has long puzzled historians. Scholars, who study historical artifacts, have conducted investigations into the device's intricate system of gears, and their research has ultimately revealed that it functioned as a sophisticated astronomical calendar.

Which of the following versions of the underlined portion best produces a clear, concise, and grammatically correct sentence?

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Cevap: Investigations of the device's intricate gear system reveal that it

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Investigations of the device's intricate gear system reveal that it
The correct option is both grammatically correct and the most concise. It removes the redundant clause about scholars and uses a direct subject-verb relationship ('Investigations... reveal') to state the action clearly and efficiently.

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1
Analyze the underlined portion for redundancy and wordiness.
The original phrasing contains redundant details, such as defining what scholars study, and uses a wordy, indirect structure to describe the research outcome.
ACT English questions prioritize clear, direct, and concise expressions over wordy structures.
2
Evaluate the grammar of the concise alternatives to avoid syntax errors.
The option beginning with 'Scholars investigated...' creates a comma splice. The option beginning with 'Investigating the device's...' results in a sentence fragment because it lacks a main predicate.
An option that eliminates wordiness but introduces a grammatical error is incorrect.
3
Select the option that is both concise and grammatically correct.
The phrasing that states 'Investigations of the device's intricate gear system reveal that it' is grammatically sound, direct, and free of redundant words.
This choice successfully streamlines the sentence while maintaining grammatical integrity.

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Eliminating Wordiness
Tahmini Süre:45s
Soru 40Soru

In the damp, shaded understory of temperate rainforests, certain species of fungi emit a soft, greenish glow, this glowing illumination, which shines with light, serves to attract nocturnal insects that distribute the fungi's spores.

Which choice is the most concise and grammatically correct replacement for the underlined portion of the sentence?

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Cevap: which serves

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The correct choice is the option that reads 'which serves', as it creates a grammatically correct relative clause that avoids a comma splice and eliminates all redundant repetition of the word 'glow'.
The correct option is the most concise and grammatically correct choice. By replacing the underlined portion with a relative clause starting with 'which', the sentence correctly joins the dependent clause to the main clause, avoiding a comma splice. Furthermore, it eliminates the redundant phrases 'glowing illumination' and 'shines with light' because the preceding clause already mentions a 'glow'.

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1
Analyze the underlined portion for redundancy.
The phrases 'glowing illumination' and 'shines with light' are redundant because the sentence already describes the subject as a 'glow'.
Conciseness is a key rule on the ACT English exam; words or phrases that repeat information already established in the sentence must be removed.
2
Evaluate the sentence structure and punctuation.
The sentence consists of two independent clauses: the first ends with 'glow' and the second begins with the underlined portion. Joining these two clauses with a comma alone creates a comma splice.
To correct a comma splice, the clauses must be separated by a period, a semicolon, a coordinating conjunction, or one clause must be made dependent using a relative pronoun like 'which'.
3
Choose the option that resolves both the redundancy and the grammatical error.
The relative clause 'which serves' removes all redundant wording and correctly joins the clauses, resolving the comma splice.
The correct option must be both grammatically sound and free of unnecessary repetition.

Anahtar Kavram

Eliminating Redundancy
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