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Zorluk: OrtaEstablishing Introductions and Thesis Statements

The following is an excerpt from a draft of an essay about New York City's postal history.

In the late 1890s, New York City struggled to manage its rapidly growing volume of mail, as horse-drawn wagons routinely became gridlocked in congested streets. To resolve this crisis, the post office installed a network of underground pneumatic tubes that propelled mail canisters beneath the city streets at speeds of up to thirty miles per hour. At its peak, this subterranean network moved millions of letters daily across Manhattan and Brooklyn.

[1] ___________________________________________________________________. In 1918, the federal government suspended funding for the pneumatic system in order to prioritize the war effort. Following the war, the postal service chose to invest in automobile trucks, which could carry larger volumes over greater distances, and by 1953, the last of the city's pneumatic mail tubes were permanently shut down.

Which choice most effectively introduces the second paragraph by establishing its main focus?

  1. However, the subterranean system's era of dominance proved to be relatively short-lived.Cevap
  2. B
    Although the pneumatic tube network was a technological marvel that drastically reduced mail delivery times in the city.
  3. C
    Because the underground tubes eventually became too expensive to maintain; the postal service looked for other options.
  4. D
    Furthermore, the city's expanding geography is requiring new ways to transport mail.

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The choice that begins with 'However, the subterranean system's era' is the correct answer because it is grammatically complete and establishes the transition to the paragraph's focus on the decline and eventual abandonment of the pneumatic tubes.
The correct choice is grammatically sound and introduces the paragraph's focus on the decline and eventual abandonment of the pneumatic tube system by using the transition word 'However' to contrast with the success described in the first paragraph.

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1
Analyze the flow of the passage to identify the topic of the second paragraph.
The first paragraph describes the success of the pneumatic tube system, while the second paragraph describes its suspension, displacement by trucks, and eventual shutdown. The second paragraph's topic is the decline and demise of the system.
This helps determine what kind of introductory sentence is rhetorically appropriate.
2
Evaluate the grammatical correctness of each choice.
One choice is a sentence fragment; another misuses a semicolon to separate a dependent clause; a third introduces an illogical tense shift to the present. Only the transition sentence starting with 'However' is both grammatically correct and logically fitting.
To eliminate grammatically flawed choices and select the one that is correct in both grammar and context.

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Establishing Introductions and Thesis Statements
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