Poetic Diction and Syntax
19 questions
Read the following poem carefully before choosing your answer.
1 Down the long corridor of silent stone,
2 Where once the heavy step of kings did sound,
3 Now creeps the ivy, ancient and alone,
4 To wrap its fingers round the dusty ground.
5 No voice of herald wakes the sleeping hall,
6 Nor does the torch flare bright against the cold;
7 But shadows, cast from some forgotten wall,
8 A deeper silence than the night unfold.
9 Yet in this ruin, where the grand decay,
10 A single blossom greets the rising day.
In lines 7–8 ("But shadows . . . unfold"), which of the following best describes the grammatical relationship and function of the word order?
Read the following lines from Thomas Hardy's poem "The Darkling Thrush" (1900):
I leant upon a coppice gate
When Frost was spectre-gray,
And Winter's dregs made desolate
The weakening eye of day.
In lines 3��4, the poet alters standard English word order by placing the adjective "desolate" before the direct object "The weakening eye of day." Which of the following best describes the rhetorical effect of this syntactic inversion?
Read the following passage from Robert Browning's dramatic monologue "My Last Duchess" (1842):
1 She had
2 A heart—how shall I say?—too soon made glad,
3 Too easily impressed; she liked whate'er
4 She looked on, and her looks went everywhere.
5 Sir, ’twas all one! My favour at her breast,
6 The dropping of the daylight in the West,
7 The bough of cherries some officious fool
8 Broke in the orchard for her, the white mule
9 She rode with round the terrace—all and each
10 Would draw from her alike the approving speech,
11 Or blush, at least. She thanked men,—good! but thanked
12 Somehow—I know not how—as if she ranked
13 My gift of a nine-hundred-years-old name
14 With anybody’s gift.
In lines 5–11 ("My favour . . . blush, at least"), the syntactical structure of the sentence primarily serves to highlight which of the following?
Read the following poem, "Remember" by Christina Rossetti (1862):
1 Remember me when I am gone away,
2 Gone far away into the silent land;
3 When you can no more hold me by the hand,
4 Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay.
5 Remember me when no more day by day
6 You tell me of our future that you plann'd:
7 Only remember me; you understand
8 It will be late then to counsel or to pray.
9 Yet if you should forget me for a while
10 And afterwards remember, do not grieve:
11 For if the darkness and corruption leave
12 A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,
13 Better by far you should forget and smile
14 Than that you should remember and be sad.
In lines 11–14 ("For if . . . be sad"), the syntactical structure of the sentence primarily serves to do which of the following?
Read the following lines from Thomas Hardy's poem "The Darkling Thrush" (1900):
1 I leant upon a coppice gate
2 When Frost was spectre-gray,
3 And Winter's dregs made desolate
4 The weakening eye of day.
5 The tangled bine-stems scored the sky
6 Like strings of broken lyres,
7 And all mankind that haunted nigh
8 Had sought their household fires.
In lines 3–4 ("And Winter's dregs made desolate / The weakening eye of day"), how does the syntactical structure of the clause contribute to the meaning of the passage?
Read the following lines from John Donne's "Holy Sonnet XIV" (1633):
1 Batter my heart, three-person'd God, for you
2 As yet but knock, breathe, shine, and seek to mend;
3 That I may rise and stand, o'erthrow me, and bend
4 Your force to break, blow, burn, and make me new.
5 I, like an usurp'd town, to another due,
6 Labor to admit you, but Oh, to no end;
7 Reason, your viceroy in me, me should defend,
8 But is captiv'd, and proves weak or untrue.
In line 7 ("Reason, your viceroy in me, me should defend"), the inverted word order primarily serves to do which of the following?
Read the following lines from Gerard Manley Hopkins' poem 'The Windhover' (written 1877):
1 I caught this morning morning's minion, king-
2 dom of daylight's dauphin, dapple-dawn-drawn Falcon, in his riding
3 Of the rolling level underneath him steady air, and striding
4 High there, how he rung upon the rein of a wimpling wing
5 In his ecstasy! then off, off forth on swing,
6 As a skate's heel sweeps smooth on a bow-bend: the hurl and gliding
7 Rebuffed the big wind. My heart in hiding
8 Stirred for a bird,—the achieve of, the mastery of the thing!
In lines 2–3, the syntax of the phrase 'the rolling level underneath him steady air' deviates from standard grammatical word order. Which of the following best describes the primary function of this syntactical deviation?
Read the following lines from John Keats’s poem "Ode on a Grecian Urn" (1819):
1 Who are these coming to the sacrifice?
2 To what green altar, O mysterious priest,
3 Lead'st thou that heifer lowing at the skies,
4 And all her silken flanks with garlands drest?
5 What little town by river or sea shore,
6 Or mountain-built with peaceful citadel,
7 Is emptied of this folk, this pious morn?
8 And, little town, thy streets for evermore
9 Will silent be; and not a soul to tell
10 Why thou art desolate, can e'er return.
In lines 8–10 ("And, little town . . . e'er return"), which of the following best describes the effect of the syntactical structure of the clause "and not a soul to tell / Why thou art desolate, can e'er return"?
Read the following lines from Alfred, Lord Tennyson's poem "Ulysses" (1842):
18 I am a part of all that I have met;
19 Yet all experience is an arch wherethrough
20 Gleams that untravelled world whose margin fades
21 Forever and forever when I move.
22 How dull it is to pause, to make an end,
23 To rust unburnished, not to shine in use!
24 As though to breathe were life! Life piled on life
25 Were all too little, and of one to me
26 Little remains; but every hour is saved
27 From that eternal silence, something more,
28 A bringer of new things; and vile it were
29 For some three suns to store and hoard myself,
30 And this gray spirit yearning in desire
31 To follow knowledge like a sinking star,
32 Beyond the utmost bound of human thought.
In lines 19–21 ("Yet all . . . I move"), which of the following best describes the primary effect of the syntactical inversion in the clause beginning with "wherethrough"?
Read the following poem:
1 Beneath the vault of quiet night,
2 Where stars their silent vigil keep,
3 A traveler seeks the fading light
4 Of dreams that vanish in his sleep.
5 To minds by heavy care oppressed,
6 No gentle balm does nature yield;
7 The troubled soul finds little rest
8 In empty wood or barren field.
9 Yet onward through the dark he goes,
10 Though paths are dim and hope is cold,
11 Until the eastern horizon glows
12 With morning's first, triumphant gold.
In lines 5–6 ('To minds . . . yield'), the syntactical inversion of the sentence structure functions primarily to do which of the following?
Read the following stanza from William Butler Yeats's poem "When You Are Old" (1893):
When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
In the stanza, how does the syntactic structure of the first two lines primarily contribute to the tone and meaning of the passage?
Read the following lines from John Milton's sonnet "When I consider how my light is spent" (1673):
When I consider how my light is spent,
Ere half my days, in this dark world and wide,
And that one Talent which is death to hide
Lodg'd with me useless, though my Soul more bent
To serve therewith my Maker, and present
My true account, lest he returning chide,
Doth God exact day-labour, light deny'd,
I fondly ask;
In lines 1–8, the speaker delays the main subject and verb ("I fondly ask") until the final line of the opening octave. Which of the following best describes the effect of this periodic syntactic structure?
Read the following lines from W. B. Yeats's poem 'Leda and the Swan' (1923):
Being so caught up,
So mastered by the brute blood of the air,
Did she put on his knowledge with his power
Before the indifferent beak could let her drop?
In these lines, how does the syntactic structure of the sentence contribute to the presentation of the central question?
Read the following poem, "London, 1802" by William Wordsworth, first published in 1807:
1 Milton! thou shouldst be living at this hour:
2 England hath need of thee: she is a fen
3 Of stagnant waters: altar, sword, and pen,
4 Fireside, the heroic wealth of hall and bower,
5 Have forfeited their ancient English dower
6 Of inward happiness. We are selfish men;
7 Oh! raise us up, return to us again;
8 And give us manners, virtue, freedom, power.
9 Thy soul was like a Star, and dwelt apart;
10 Thou hadst a voice whose sound was like the sea:
11 Pure as the naked heavens, majestic, free,
12 So didst thou travel on life's common way,
13 In cheerful godliness; and yet thy heart
14 The lowliest duties on herself did lay.
In lines 13–14 ("and yet thy heart / The lowliest duties on herself did lay"), the inverted syntactical structure primarily serves to do which of the following?
Read the following lines from William Wordsworth's sonnet 'The World Is Too Much With Us' (1807):
The world is too much with us; late and soon,
Getting and spending, we lay waste our powers;—
Little we see in Nature that is ours;
We have given our hearts away, a sordid boon!
In line 3, how does the inversion of standard grammatical syntax ('Little we see...') contribute to the meaning of the stanza?
Read the following lines from Christina Rossetti's poem "Song" (1862):
When I am dead, my dearest,
Sing no sad songs for me;
Plant thou no roses at my head,
Nor shady cypress tree:
Be the green grass above me
With showers and dewdrops wet;
And if thou wilt, remember,
And if thou wilt, forget.
In the final two lines, the parallel structure of the clauses ("And if thou wilt, remember, / And if thou wilt, forget") functions primarily to do which of the following?
Read the following poem, "Ozymandias" by Percy Bysshe Shelley (1818):
1 I met a traveller from an antique land,
2 Who said—"Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
3 Stand in the desert. . . . Near them, on the sand,
4 Half sunk a shattered visage lies, whose frown,
5 And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,
6 Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
7 Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
8 The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed;
9 And on the pedestal, these words appear:
10 "My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings;
11 Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!"
12 Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
13 Of that colossal Wreck, boundless and bare
14 The lone and level sands stretch far away.
In lines 6–8 ("Tell that . . . heart that fed"), which of the following best describes the grammatical relationship between "passions" (line 6) and "The hand . . . and the heart" (line 8)?
Read the following lines from William Shakespeare's "Sonnet 29" (published 1609):
When, in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes,
I all alone beweep my outcast state,
And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries,
And look upon myself and curse my fate,
Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,
Featured like him, like him with friends possessed,
Desiring this man’s art and that man’s scope,
With what I most enjoy contented least;
Yet in these thoughts myself almost despising,
Haply I think on thee, and then my state,
Like to the lark at break of day arising
From sullen earth, sings hymns at heaven’s gate;
Which of the following best describes the effect of the syntactic structure across the first twelve lines of the poem?
Read the following poem, "On His Blindness" by John Milton (written c. 1655), carefully before choosing your answer:
1 When I consider how my light is spent,
2 Ere half my days in this dark world and wide,
3 And that one talent which is death to hide
4 Lodged with me useless, though my soul more bent
5 To serve therewith my Maker, and present
6 My true account, lest He returning chide;
7 "Doth God exact day-labor, light denied?"
8 I fondly ask. But Patience, to prevent
9 That murmur, soon replies, "God doth not need
10 Either man's work or his own gifts. Who best
11 Bear his mild yoke, they serve him best. His state
12 Is kingly: thousands at his bidding speed,
13 And post o'er land and ocean without rest;
14 They also serve who only stand and wait."
In lines 1–8 ("When I consider... I fondly ask"), the delayed introduction of the main clause ("I fondly ask") after a series of subordinate clauses primarily serves to do which of the following?